BUSINESS TRIP

Last month I went to Toronto to do some research about my business. As I had closed up my business in Saskatoon it was necessary to find a better place to move. First of all I made an appointment with the manager of a clinic in downtown. I met her and I believe that meeting was helpful because I got many information about marketing and finding practitioners that I never knew before. 

In this trip I could met a Doctor who worked with me in Saskatoon before. I noticed that although it is easy to find a practitioner in Toronto but there are many competition in this area whereas in Saskatoon our service was unique and there was not any competitor. Of course it is very hard to find proper practitioner in Saskatoon.

I also visited a vacant office for rent, a very spacious office with five large rooms and beautiful reception area with very low price for the rent. It was very interesting for me because the rent of a same office in Saskatoon was at least twice. on the other hand, I saw a sign of a same clinic which was closed in that building. Both of them was a kind of portent for me and said:" you should be careful!"

I believe that it was a successful business trip, not to find a better location but finding more information to compare situations between two cities. Next time I have to prepare more appointments to see more people and places so that I have a comprehensive inference.

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BUSINESS TRIP Last month I went to Toronto to do some research on my business. As I had closed up my business in Saskatoon, it was necessary to find a better place to move to. First of all I made an appointment with the manager of a clinic in downtown Toronto. that meeting was helpful because I got a lot of information about marketing and staffing. I could also met a Doctor who worked with me in Saskatoon before. I noticed that although it is easy to find a practitioner in Toronto, there are much competition this area whereas in Saskatoon our service was unique with no competitor. Of course On the other hand, it is very hard to find a proper practitioner in Saskatoon. I also visited a vacant office for rent, a very spacious office with five large rooms and a beautiful reception area at a very low price for the rent. It was very interesting for me because the rent of a same office in Saskatoon was at least twice as much. on the other hand, I saw a sign of a clinic with the same services which was closed in that building. Both of them(cheap rent and closed clinic) were a kind of portent for me and alarmed," you should be careful!" I believe that it was a successful business trip, not to find a better location but make it parallel more information to compare situations between the two cities. Next time I have to prepare more appointments to see more people and places so that I can come to a better-informed decision.